Ancient's Haven

Um... Resident Senior Asian of Prout. I'm pretty much a techie when it comes down to everything. Anime and manga <3. Gamer too. I am the 3.0 ...wow.

Sunday, April 30, 2006

The Quintet of One

Here's something that just popped into my head and I worked. Tell me what you think?

Seraface burns;
Mysticen freezes;
Trel creates illusions.

Then there is Ster,
Known as the dark one,
Tainted yet full of light.

Together here,
Each is part of one;
On them does he depend.

The key he is,
Their body is his,
Yet all need be to live.

Young Arna strong;
Elder Arna wise;
Corastac acts the child;
And Falagoth blunt and cold;
The key decides with their advice,
All the decisions in all their life.

1 Comments:

Blogger Laura said...

LOTRish (but that's good in my book). Nine rings to rule them all.... same rhythm sort of. One awkward line: "Depends on them he does." THAT reminds me of Gollum... or Yoda. Good fantasyish poem. Whoosh!

5:35 PM  

Post a Comment

<< Home