The Quintet of One
Here's something that just popped into my head and I worked. Tell me what you think?
Seraface burns;
Mysticen freezes;
Trel creates illusions.
Then there is Ster,
Known as the dark one,
Tainted yet full of light.
Together here,
Each is part of one;
On them does he depend.
The key he is,
Their body is his,
Yet all need be to live.
Young Arna strong;
Elder Arna wise;
Corastac acts the child;
And Falagoth blunt and cold;
The key decides with their advice,
All the decisions in all their life.
1 Comments:
LOTRish (but that's good in my book). Nine rings to rule them all.... same rhythm sort of. One awkward line: "Depends on them he does." THAT reminds me of Gollum... or Yoda. Good fantasyish poem. Whoosh!
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